Reviews for Rubik's Cube
Inflaming Kaliope chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I like this :D

Really wish I had more to say, and I know I'm meant to offer you constructive criticism, but the way you've expressed everything has been perfect.
felicia13 chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Nice. I like it's shortness, bluntness, and curiosity. There's just something about the way you write... it's entrancing sometimes. I like to fall into the words.

Cute poem.

Fan Fan chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
A Rubik's Cube exchanged in the air,

Blue, orange painted over red.

Every face a picture of wholeness,

Except two, spaces of loneliness.

Opposite sides of this perfectly balanced world,

One noticed, the other unfelt gold.

Walking up to this beautiful imperfection,

A door opens.

"Hold on there," I said,

"Want to write a story together?"

Very touching poem, here's one of my own just for reply :)