|Reviews for Rubik's Cube|
| Inflaming Kaliope chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I like this :D
Really wish I had more to say, and I know I'm meant to offer you constructive criticism, but the way you've expressed everything has been perfect.
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Nice. I like it's shortness, bluntness, and curiosity. There's just something about the way you write... it's entrancing sometimes. I like to fall into the words.
| Fan Fan chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
A Rubik's Cube exchanged in the air,
Blue, orange painted over red.
Every face a picture of wholeness,
Except two, spaces of loneliness.
Opposite sides of this perfectly balanced world,
One noticed, the other unfelt gold.
Walking up to this beautiful imperfection,
A door opens.
"Hold on there," I said,
"Want to write a story together?"
Very touching poem, here's one of my own just for reply :)