Reviews for The Nonconformist's Lament
RedWheeler chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Hey there, I don't know how much time I have to dwaddle around on the computer, so I figured I would review some of your songs... seeing how far I am behind.

Anyway, this song has some amazing flow to it, it all just comes together rather easily. Probably one of your best in that aspect, since the rhymes are not forced, and again, everything appears to be interlinked together.

My favourite segment was: "For what it’s worth, it could be worse! But it could be better too! I know we’ve strived to live a lie! But I did it all for you! Break away, when you can’t stay! With nothing left to lose!" This is how I came to the conclusion of the above, there were rhymes, but they were not made blatant.

Great job.