Aw, that was cute!

Oh my god! He used her! But he loves her anyway so it doesn't matter right?

One kiss is all it takes to melt away any negative feeling she might have, right?

I cannot believe this is what girls have come to. I am embarrassed on the behalf of the entire female population. The protagonist had a surprisingly fickle character.

I mean no offense to you personally. I've seen tons of stories where the lead female is shallow to a frustrating extent. It's just that your story happened to be the one I'm reviewing.

I like your writing style though. You have great potential!

Aww this was so cute! I loved it! :D

Aww. I loved this! I'm starting to like oneshots :)

hahaha thats cute :)

Fantastic story!

That was so cute! I absolutely loved it...sure it was cliche, but it was so adorable and really well written. Awesome job!

really great one shot

Aw, so cute! :D I love the idea! What IS the difference? :P

you have an amazing writing style!

but the story was EXTREMELY cliche.

i would have loved it anyways if you didnt move the plot along so fast.

there was hardly anything leading to her realizing that he was using her, and then him falling in love with her anyways. the characters needed more time to adjust to the situation and to each other.

Ahh-haha!

That was great! I totally want some peppermint gum now! lol

I'm totally adding this to meh's fav stories!

never knew gum would be so popular with kissing and wooing!

aww this was really sweet :) good job

AW!

That was so... cute!

I loved it!

i like spearmint better ]