Reviews for Peppermint Gum |
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Tasha Lee chapter 1 . 11/22/2007 Ugh. I could never tell the difference either. Great job. Fluffier than a...really fluffy thing. No grammar mistakes, great plot, nice work. Tasha |
ess3sandra chapter 1 . 11/22/2007 F* me this was entertaining, well done hun! |
peanutneko chapter 1 . 11/22/2007 Cuute |
Sukidayo chapter 1 . 11/22/2007 WE! xD *does happy dance* Despite some grammar mistakes, it was warm and fluffeh! |
Shannon chapter 1 . 11/22/2007 your so good at writing love stories please continue it pretty pretty pretty please |
Ms ShiSha chapter 1 . 11/22/2007 well, that was a really sweet story, the female character was a bit naive but it it fitted into the story ... you did a good job, you made me smile D nice, nice |
Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 11/22/2007 ahh sweet and fluffy! like cotton candy! (hey! that kinda rhymes! lol) :D |
Pop the Bubble chapter 1 . 11/22/2007 spearmint tastes way better way beter D |
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 Warm and fuzzy and funny. Oh, and let's not forget amazing writing. (: Love it, and I'm happy somebody added it to the c2! (: |
Romanii chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 arHh *feels all warm and fuzzy* i loved this one shot. i hope you keep on writing 'cos this was really good ]] |
indigoxnotes chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 *giggles* the hopeless romantic in me is squealing - At first for some reason I thought this was set in a high school. Maybe thats just me being thick. Anyways, very cute story ] |
idiedlaughing chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 of course i luved it! well the begging (like when you were describing the hallway) it kinda seemed a bit repetitive and almost forced if that makes any sense but it was a really sweet story if not semi cliche but the peppermint/spearmint was a nice semi twist XP much luv sarahh |
inFEARandFAITH chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 This was so cute. |
The Latest Plague chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 wow this was awesome. very cute. i can never tell gum flavors apart either. |
Love is a Ring Toss Game chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 Great job! I also agree with qwart...it seems a bit High school to me, but I loved it anyways! Great to hear from you! |