Reviews for Peppermint Gum
Tasha Lee chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Ugh. I could never tell the difference either.

Great job. Fluffier than a...really fluffy thing. No grammar mistakes, great plot, nice work.

Tasha
ess3sandra chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
F* me this was entertaining, well done hun!
peanutneko chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Cuute
Sukidayo chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
WE! xD

*does happy dance* Despite some grammar mistakes, it was warm and fluffeh!
Shannon chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
your so good at writing love stories please continue it pretty pretty pretty please
Ms ShiSha chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
well, that was a really sweet story, the female character was a bit naive but it it fitted into the story ... you did a good job, you made me smile D

nice, nice
Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
ahh sweet and fluffy! like cotton candy! (hey! that kinda rhymes! lol) :D
Pop the Bubble chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
spearmint tastes way better

way beter D
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Warm and fuzzy and funny. Oh, and let's not forget amazing writing. (:

Love it, and I'm happy somebody added it to the c2! (:
Romanii chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
arHh *feels all warm and fuzzy*

i loved this one shot. i hope you keep on writing 'cos this was really good ]]
indigoxnotes chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
*giggles* the hopeless romantic in me is squealing - At first for some reason I thought this was set in a high school. Maybe thats just me being thick. Anyways, very cute story ]
idiedlaughing chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
of course

i luved it!

well the begging (like when you were describing the hallway) it kinda seemed a bit repetitive and almost forced if that makes any sense

but it was a really sweet story if not semi cliche but the peppermint/spearmint was a nice semi twist XP

much luv

sarahh
inFEARandFAITH chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
This was so cute.
The Latest Plague chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
wow this was awesome. very cute. i can never tell gum flavors apart either.
Love is a Ring Toss Game chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Great job! I also agree with qwart...it seems a bit High school to me, but I loved it anyways! Great to hear from you!
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