Reviews for Peppermint Gum |
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Mango Smoothie chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 I liked it. It was sweet. Nice job, and it was such a cute oneshot. |
Kagura615 chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 Wow. Very thrilling. This definitely warmed up my day! There was the occasional grammatical or spelling error, but for the most part this is gorgeously written. The descriptions and the whole fuzziness of it took my breath away. Just...wow! Amazing. I think I'm in love with this one-shot of yours. X3 Ah, and might I add that James sounds absolutely and positively hott? I wouldn't go so far as to worship the ground he walked on either, but /my goodness/. He is incredible. I can sympathize to an extent with his fan club girls. They definitely have good taste in men. And, of course, there's Emily...typical and yet not. She's not denying he's completely made of awesome, but she isn't drooling all over him, either. I like how she's realistic in the way that she's not going to deny such a hott guy like him, even if she isn't a fan girl. Any sane girl in her position would be swapping spit with him as well, I presume. Overall, this is wonderfully written. I love it! Please continue writing these kinds of one-shots. |
Alenor chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 aw how fluffy! ~ Alenor |
Lenka Penka chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 aww that was wiked cute! post more like this one! that'd be wiked cool ! |
TwinkleHeart chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 AWE! |
deefective chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 Aww! This made me smile and giggle all the way through. Very, very good job! |
qwart chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 I like this, it's really cute. However in my opinion it makes more sense if it were a High School story, not a college story... |
XxAntagonistxX chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 I love it. |