Reviews for The Smarting Results of Overindulgance
ivyfurl chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Four words:

Story. Of. My. Life.

I can truly relate.

I don't care about your writing style - it's wonderful, but I don't care.

The pain that I felt reading this poem... damn.

It was beautiful.

-Abby
Maria San Juan chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
Wow I really like this! It has a nice flow, and I love your word choice-it makes it really come alive! Nice job!

Maria

PS: I accidentally deleted "The Nature of Dreams" so if you want to add it to your favorites again, it's back up.

Just call me a computer idiot. \
Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
I like this poem. Good work!

-Blood