|Reviews for dizzy|
| daughterofmusic chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Interesting... this is only your 2nd piece of work I've read, and it has the same title as one of my poems. (it's not on FP quite yet.)
I like the depth in it - it's short, but it communicates a certain desperation. Keep writing!
Daughter of Music
| SilverTwilight chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
I'm not sure if I getting it right, but if it was meant the way I understood, it's really well done. I imagine the lower-case letters and the lack of punctuation are to create a sense of desperation, and it's effective here. Perhaps if it were a little longer...