Reviews for I Am A Flyer
Aiedial chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
WAH! *leans forwards*

so good so good...
Aiedial chapter 1 . 1/2/2009

i like it.

its interesting.

your characters are so...real. Jett was an instant "omg...must read more about him." kinda person.

YAY *settles down to read more*
Badger250 chapter 27 . 12/19/2008
So good! I love that way Raven treats Jett. It makes me smile when I read. Is Raven the son of Ra'Skevvor? That would make things a bit complicated...
Badger250 chapter 8 . 12/19/2008
Ha ha ha! Love the end!
Badger250 chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
Goodness, I wish I started reading this story a while ago. Only the first chapter and I'm already hooked!
Dachande663-ff chapter 27 . 12/17/2008
Brilliant chapter, I've really missed this story. Good to see another side to Raven as well. Hope you can update sooner as well, keep on writing, great story!
AtlantisGirl12 chapter 27 . 12/17/2008
O my worth the wait! This chapter was really well done. The only complaint I have is that it's making me impatient for the next one!

I have to say, Raven's my favorite character of your story (although for some reason I have the sneaking suspicion that he's going to get killed off...I hope not!). Was that his flashback at the end?

Keep up the good work! :)
Caecilia chapter 18 . 11/27/2008
[fifteen flyers-in-training] hadn't, in the earlier chapter, Suil say that there were only 14 of them left?

You are great with suspense. You are just making this story amazing with the way you post up and break up this chapters.

Great job!

~Caecilia Bellz
Caecilia chapter 17 . 11/27/2008
This really doesn't pertain to the story, but I like your breaks that you put in. They always look pretty nifty...

Geez, kids are stupid...

I feel so bad for Jett!

Story's getting better and better. Didn't think it was even possible!

~Caecilia Bellz, Beer Run
Caecilia chapter 16 . 11/27/2008
I love the way you can make it so that in the beginning, things seem so happy, with Jett seeing the field. Then, you completely turn it, so that it's a dreary place. Great job!

Oh, I cannot wait to see what Jett's planning.

Great chapter!

~Caecilia Bellz
Caecilia chapter 15 . 11/27/2008
[His best and only friend had betrayed him! How could she possibly be friends with such a horrible freak?] hehehe. Poor Raven.

This is getting even better. Sorry I'm not leaving decent reviews. Just gushing. Your descriptions are great. Dialogue doesn't seem strained, it flows naturally, which I can really respect, because I find myself struggling with it.

Good job!

Caecilia chapter 14 . 11/27/2008
Wow... Raven's kinda psycho.

I think I really like him.

Love your characters, Kuro. They're really strong, and all have personalities.

Can't wait to read more. I say that every review, but it's true.

This is all so good!

Caecilia chapter 13 . 11/27/2008
I really like Ravia. Glad to see her back in the story again!

[Thiswas the flyer] space needed!

[probablywill end up hurting yo] space!

o_O Must go to next chapter! The cliffhanger! It's so amazing!

Caecilia chapter 12 . 11/27/2008
Aw... Poor Jett!

That Raven... He makes my head hurt. What a confusing guy.

Suil seems confused too. Can't wait to see where this'll go!

Caecilia chapter 11 . 11/26/2008
[Trokas and secrets.] don't you want that 'k' to be capitalized? Because, if so, there's a couple other places where it's not capitalized..

[I strongly disagree. For the past week, I’ve done my best to kill the kid. And frankly, he’s still alive. Somehow,” he added in a dark mutter. “Kid’s gotta be some kind of freak...”] I cracked up at this line... pftt...

[“Jett/?”] might want to take out that slash...

o_O IT'S SO GOOD! Getting even better! Can't wait to read more!

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