Woah, Raven is so hardcore, and ... scary. You are so mean to Jett, you know that?

Ah, well, makes for a good story so I won't complain.

Now he's being chased by two of them? Poor kid.

Ya know, I'm actually stating to feel sorry for Gray. All he wants to do is just hang out and do nothing but now he's gotta kill some kid who just won't die!

Poor Jett, He's got a psyco trying to kill him no way to get home and now pigs. At least he now has a little glimer of hope! But knowing you you'll probaly snatch it away you cruel, cruel author!

Keep up the good work!

I finally got around to reading one of your stories lol. I liked this one, it's got an interesting story, and some cool scenes. I liked the whole dangling over a chasm part, as well as when Gray came to retrieve Jett. Lots of symbolism and stuff going on there, as well as with Ravia. I'm excited to see where this goes, and what secrets the flyers are hiding.

very exciting chapter. good to learn a little more! keep it up!

great chapter! sorry for the lack of reply as of yet!

he's so gonna go with the flyer options and become amazing isn't he? :) great chapter! I like this 'grey' character! great! keep it up! fran ~*~

ooh very exciting! great chapter! very intriguing!

ooh really good start! very exciting! you know that I liked the flyers from your other stories! can't wait to read more! keep it up! fran ~*~