Reviews for I Am A Flyer
TheChowMaster chapter 50 . 1/23/2011
Wow. I loved this story! It was amazing, from Jett's first encounter with the TroKas, to the horrific trip in the Forbidden Zone, and the tension during the family reunion; I loved it all. The only thing that I had an issue with was that the ending seemed to be in the middle of something, rather than the end. I think it's only because I wanted to read more, and your sequel isn't updated yet; I am somewhat impatient ;). Also, I wish you didn't make Jett's flyer suit white, I preferred the black, but that is just my opinion, and it doesn't affect my opinion of the story itself. Anyways, congratulations on a job well done. I really liked it. D
Moonlite Star chapter 50 . 12/25/2010
well, job well done. thoroughly enjoyed this story; it kept my attention to the end. It's not easy finding good stories on fictionpress nowadays; I'm glad that I stumbled upon yours. thanks for sharing this! I look forward to the sequel! D
Moonlite Star chapter 43 . 12/25/2010
I liked the various viewpoints. It gives the reader a chance to know about different things going on in the story (and the author to reveal such information). It also made me like Syk a lot more. :D haha I tend to like manipulative characters for some reason.
Moonlite Star chapter 39 . 12/25/2010
lol. yes. fly. simple. raven sure has a way of teaching.
Moonlite Star chapter 30 . 12/24/2010
Raven snores! Ahh...that was hilarious!
Moonlite Star chapter 24 . 12/24/2010
great build up to Jett's transformation and change in will. I like that you occasionally added in some contradictory thoughts and showed how Jett wrestled with himself every now and then, with his experience in the Forbidden Zone changing everything. nicely done!
Moonlite Star chapter 22 . 12/24/2010
lol, nice ending to a chapter. "I'm going to die!" haha...poor Jett. So close to escape, only to come face to face with Raven. I love the way you write humor into this story!
Moonlite Star chapter 14 . 12/24/2010
I'm enjoying this story. Thanks for posting it. I like your characters, Gray and Raven. They're...quite something.
Silver Shadowbreeze chapter 49 . 8/9/2010
Haha, this is the first story I've ever read on fictionpress. I really like your writing style and how Jett develops over time, plus the plot twists that honestly weren't on my radar. Great job on getting my to believe the reality of your story. Any chance on publishing it?

moongazer7 chapter 10 . 6/25/2010
Aha! Raven at last! Though, I am sure Jett's not so happy to see him. Hahaha! Oh, and there's Gray too, like Raven's not enough.

I was really wrapped up in this chapter, and before anything happened I was hopeing for Jett to get away safely. I was hoping he'd get out of the city at the least. I could feel the thrill and the excitement that he's seemed to have gotten away. I was secretly hoping Raven would fail at finding him. Then I was just terrified for Jet. Gray wasn't so bad, but when Raven stood there and didn't move I was really starting to wonder. I could almost feel Raven throwing Jet. that was interesting. I admit to feeling sorry for Jet, quite a bit.
moongazer7 chapter 11 . 6/25/2010
I admit to feeling a little down here. I was hoping Jett would survive. I was afraid he might not seeing what happend in the earlier chapter with the other deaths.

I enjoyed Raven's attitude throughout the whole chapter or the parts he's in. I always thought him interesting. a little vein but pretty good. I liked his character from the start. I could imagine the meeting well. though I thought the counsel might give Raven a tougher time than that.

I also liked the last part with Jet sort of recounting his story.
moongazer7 chapter 12 . 6/25/2010
Lots and lots of fun! I am sure Jett agrees. *sarcastic*

I enjoyed this chapter as the boys finish up talking. I think there conversations is always worth reading! I do like Suil. But my favorite part was with Raven and how Jett sat still and he asked if it was a disease oof some sort. Hahaha! Now that's funny. I think followed by the part with Jett crumbling on the floor. I thought I'd been turned tin to Jello once, but I guess Jet was more so Jellowie! Hahahaha!
moongazer7 chapter 13 . 6/25/2010
I love the picnic sceen. It's pretty nice. I thought it was all pretty funny especially how Jet gobbled down his food. that was pretty darn funny. Oh, the apple chucking was as well! I love Raven already. He seems much nicer in these last two chapters. and then he gets mean at the end... what's up with the guy anyway? Hahaha! He's pretty cool though.
moongazer7 chapter 14 . 6/25/2010
I first thought, whoa, where did that thing ocome from? and then It was like, Oh no Jett! I was cheering for him the whole chapter. It was like Whoa! That was definitely one long chapter, very tense. I would have never guessed it was from Raven though. It was definitely something. Lucky Jett is fast, eh? I was hoping he wouldn't get eaten. I loved how he ended up on the ground, and there was Raven. for one silly moment I thought Raven could turn in to a cat. Hahahaha! but anyway, that was a bit of a random ending though. Funny all the same. Poor bloody Jett though.
moongazer7 chapter 15 . 6/25/2010
I always thought this chapter was interesting. though I feel sorry for Jett. I love it though that the guy calls him Brat. I thought the whole thing with Raven at the end was good. I like how he suddenly comes in. I like the whole Raven And Ravia deal. that was definitely a nice image. and fitting too. and that Raven is a guy and Ravia is a Raven.

I think I like the guy though, and how he tried to help Jett clean up but then again he was all gruff. That guy at the counter scared me a little. I wasn't too fond of his gruff nature.
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