|Reviews for Incoming|
| Undrahas chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
This was a good story. I really loved it!
It may of been morbid, and sad, but still good. Your like me...you kill the main chacter...
You almost had be crying when the men tarted to be shot at, and the paramedic looking at Kyril with a sad smile, and then turning back to his impending doom, as you so bluntly put it...
I love this story. Its one of the best stories you have ever written.
| StarSplit144 chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
One-shot, can I assume, since the main character dies? Good though. Stories about rebellions can be so depressing sometimes. Most of the time actually.