Reviews for Between
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Well I didn't really get any sense of a story or a theme here other than it 's hard to choose between things, which might have been what you were trying to convey. I think that if you wanted it to be more effective or perhaps for future writing make things a little more detailed and add more imagery.
Shinyfighter chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Sounds good but is there an answer or are you just stuck in between?