Reviews for Bewildered
whirlwind2417 chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
The emotion has a strong presense in this poem, and the purpose is made clear with a dinamic blast with the last sentance. The vocabulary is strong and varried and furthers the emotional value in the peice, making it less repetitive and more flowing, as if you are actually talking to the readers, good job.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
the emotion is well captured in this.