Reviews for The Sun You Seek
AReplacement chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
i read the story although maybe i shoudnt have because right now i have tons of hw to do...anyways i like it but i dont want to be harsh but some of the lovey dovey talk between Hayden and Charlize was kinda superficial. i like the end where Max says he regrets it. and i also like the narrative style, i think thats how you say :} but i wish there was more to the story, i didnt realize till i looked at the scroll bar that it was the end. anyways seeing as i read the whole thing i obviously enjoyed it :} just some things but very minor and overall good story and much better than anything i have written which i have not in a while :}