|Reviews for Release|
| Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I like this, a lot.
You know, in a lot of ways I think Haiku is harder than writing a long poem, because it's your responsibility to get a clear, poetic message across in seventeen syllables.
And yet somehow you pull it off effortlessly.
And I really, really like this.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Facinating, I'm very intrigued by this.
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
I like how it's a story in a way (Quite morbid but good). I can somehow relate to it right now (The feeling of being trapped and not knowing when it will be gone). This is just great...
| theory of black chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
This is brutal. It's almost scary, too. I like how the first line could have two meanings: you started to think of her constantly and/or she was trying to get there. "Begged" in the last line is the most powerful word in the whole haiku. The last line actually ties the whole stanza together because it shows how bad for either one of you it was to have her inside your head.
A change of pace, but you didn't lose your touch. Kudos.