Reviews for Again
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Once again, brilliant control of rhythm. The pulse is strong enough with the words, and is then is supplemented by your rhyme.

Also, you pulled off the repitition very well. I would never reccommend reusing the same sord so much in such a short piece, but you used it so effectively to emphasize your point without overusing it.

[she's lost, again

alone, again

but not.]

I love those lines. They made me stop and think "why not?" and my question began to be answered as I read on.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
xfail chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
The style is a bit disconcerting to begin with, but I found that, by the end of the poem, I was really enjoying it. Good job on originalty.