|Reviews for Yes, Master|
| Ishotthealbatross chapter 1 . 7/18
This story was amazing in so many ways. Cute, fluffy, with hints of sarcasm sprinkled throughout...and the humour was fantastic. I think my favourite part was how Shari's hair was catching fire all the time, and how Jinx pointed it out every time (even if only in his head) and I laughed really hard at the line, "It gets...affectionate when you struggle." All in all, it was really well-done, and fantastically written. My ideal oneshot :)
| R. Ficst chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Freaking adorable, and wonderfully steamy in the end. I love their personalities, and the world you built is lovely.
| Scardusk chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
WOW, i was not expecting Jinx to take charge like that, so fantastic! Wonderful characterisation, and world building. Great job!
| alexisrenee chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
That was one REALLY good short. You just made my day at work SOOOO much better.
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
cute story with ample humor. bravo!
| Amarantis chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
I loved the couple's natural interaction with each other.
| RawrImaDinoKitten chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Wow, if I could write like this then I believe my readers would die of happieness (and nosebleeds) OwO
Impeccable story, it just amazes me how well it is written.
| ireadtoomanybooks chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
GUH! I think my brain melted... The whole thing is gorgeous (especially the ending :D)
| Squirrel Activist chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Hey! I have always enjoyed this story immensely. I think it is beautifully written. I also like that there is an entire universe behind it; Jinx constantly makes references to things that have happened in the past, and to his life before Shari, and etc. I was wondering if maybe you could write a story about maybe when Shari first took Jinx in and saved him from being a weak demon in a demon world, or maybe the story of when Whitney tried to abduct Jinx that one time. Both of those sounded like they would be great stories to read, and although this fic is great as a standalone, I feel that having some 'prequels' of sorts would be awesome too. Anyways, even if you don't decide to write either of those stories at some point, thank you so much for this one! I enjoy it immensely and come back to read it often.
| Netrixie chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
These two are utterly adorable. OMG! I so totally thought something was going to happen with Byron... thank you that nothing did. The fluffy fluff of these two was simply perfect.
Oh- btw- did you get the idea for firewitched from The Enchanted Forest series? That's teh only other place I've heard of them. But still- I think you did a marvelous job. _
| Sas399 chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
nice temperamental master with cute little kitten familiar (sorry Jinx, at the start you seemed really kittenlike), changing into lovers...nicely done!
Nice smut as well! I really liked it! Especially the flaming hair ;) Passionate fire *purs*
Nice to see the 'obedient' familiar change to dominant lover ever so naturally. Really nice!
And the comments about stupidity of humans, knights especially, hilarious!
Thank you for sharing
| Crimsonoaks chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
this was so amazingly cute and yet managed a lovely slashy ending. Major kudos on a job more than well done.
| KeitarosKeroNeko chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
I'm so sad. I have the distinct impression that this is a oneshot. That means no more Jinx. I'm so distraught over that. (is that how you spell that? meh.)
Anyways, I have nothing coherent to say; I'm still busy reveling in the characters you made and bemoaning the fact that I don't live in their world. *sighs* Dammit. I would make a good witch, I swear! I'm tall and "intimidating" but lanky and begging for magic to course through my veins!
...but I'll shutup now
sorry 'bout that
loved your story
| xXEzaelePlusMorpheusXx chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
OMG that was creepy, read my penname and look at my avatar! I swear I have the intuition of a Mother XD!
Aw... the whole idea of this is EXTREMELY fluffy and yet... sexy... Shari seems to be "Fairty tale" with than wiccan, but at the same time, he seems to be a mix of both since you mentioned an elemnt, in fairy tale witches, they just say random stuff or shoot lightning from their hands P excellent story!
| frogs of war chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
They are so sweet together. What Jinx means when he says "Master" isn't what others might hear.
Not a lot a build up to the love scene. Nothing in the first half of the story would indicate that it would end with one (other than it's that type of story). All Jinx's longing is confined to the end.
Even though Shari thought Jinx's personality changed, it didn't really. Jinx is still Jinx.