|Reviews for winter air|
| review chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
wow mizu. i notice youve been using a different layout in your poetry! or mebbe its just because i havent been on your fpress in so long. sorry i havent reviewed in so long. T_T
i like the layout. it wows me. descriptive language isn't over the top but the description is.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
I like the alliteration in third to last stanza... the descriptions in the beginning were beautiful.. the imagery definitely paints a picture
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
I love the brisk, bitter winter air so much. Where I live, summer is very humid so it's nice to have some crisp air. This poem captured that feeling that comes with feeling the first real winter breeze very nicely.
| Laur Schiller chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Oh wow this is beautiful! Reminds me bit of e.e. cummings.
| The Postscript chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
Beautiful! This really reminds me of all the scenes from winter . . . the "glistening cement" and cinnamon, the powdered skin. Really elegant. Nice work - keep writing, k.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
Oh la la this is beautiful. :) Gorgeous poetry as I always see from you! ITS SUMMER in Australia though! Makes me feel a bit "cooler" reading this poem along with the title. :D Well done. Write on.
| His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Ooh, I really liked "awaiting the caress/of satin powdered skin/& pale dry lips"; it really personified your topic. :) And of course the end was perfect. It was good that you can back to the word bitter.