Reviews for Desperate
purple x pen chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
wow, its scary that i can relate to this, i think the reason why we, well why i, get scared that i can relate to this, is because i realise how dependent i am on the person that makes me feel this way and how much power he has over me, my only fear is him finding out, 'cause who knows what someone will do if they find out they have someone else's life in their palms?
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
I like the formatting and the rhyming of the last line in each stanza.. the piece itself was nice too... something I can definitely relate to and was well done... the only thing is I don't think the desperation came through as strongly as I thought it would because really there's only two lines about it, but that might just be me.. anyhow great piece
Innocent Tears chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
Amazing poem! So sweet.