Reviews for Bravedancing
the big crunch chapter 7 . 3/24/2008
i agree with the other reviewers. your words are so powerful and delicate.

the story itself shows everything and could easily be the most memorable thing i have ever read.
Wylloa chapter 7 . 3/16/2008
I thin I LOVE you.

Sigh. Your words are the most beautiful thing I've ever read.

In a sad, sad, way.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 6 . 3/15/2008
I'm not realy sure what to say except I love this story. Actually, today I was getting antsy, hoping you hadn't given up on it, wanting to read.
Wylloa chapter 6 . 3/15/2008
This story is going to make me cry.

Its so real, and so sad.

Breathless, I am.

Wylloa chapter 5 . 3/15/2008
oh MY GOD! WHY did you stop?


I can't wait to
Wylloa chapter 2 . 3/15/2008
I want to cry. This is so romatic.

I really love your work.
Wylloa chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
This sounds like the beginning of an amazing piece of art.

Your words are phenomanal.

Your imagery is percise. I can taste the words, the sadness, the hopelessness, the urgent desire to let. it. out.

Beauty never tasted so good.
Chasmal chapter 5 . 1/14/2008
Very intense and beautifully written. The pain is real and sometimes rather disturbing, but it has the ability to put a picture in your mind that won't go away. The characters feel real, and their emotions are wonderfully apparent.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 3 . 11/25/2007
this was really powerful. i fell in love with gin in just a couple chapters and then she got taken away. in an instant. i like how it was so abrupt. the foreshadowing is good.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
great way to begin a story, im kinda really excited for the rest now.