Reviews for Dinner
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
very powerful yet odd metaphor.. nicely done
Autumnymph chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
Whoah, nice image. I like it O_o
Soul Effrontery chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
I love this! Really, the metaphor is absoutly amazing. It's rather funny, actually. :)

But seriously, the rythem is great, and the image carries through wonderfully. And thanks for the reviews!