Reviews for A New Kind of Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story u noe... very suspenseful... Cloudiiee. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter! Poor Thomas and the other 14 people she killed. Oh I hope Nick turns out OK! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love that they are looking out for him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the story you can never find a good vamp story anymore that isnt a rip off of twilight cant wait for more hope you update soon -ifly*hugs* |
![]() ![]() Good chapter. I liked the explanation of Nicholas's past. I think it is annoying that everyone thinks of Twilight when they think of vampire stories.. she's not the only writer of stories like that. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gewd stuff yo background info was interesting, mad gewd! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad he is showing trust in her...will she do the same? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha This is definitly not a Twilight knock-off! ] That was a very quick updat i'm excited! Good chapter too! At least Caroline isn't upset right now ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really quit a good story! I started reading and it just pulled me right in... The fact that Caroline is leaving behind a twin..so, so sad. Someone you have mirrored and shared everything since birth. It truly is as if she has died.. Look forward to more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHOA CRAZY STUF |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Nice story ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! She had a sad history but it was good! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the chapter! |
![]() ![]() This seems to be a cop-off of Twilight, is it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() “You messed with their heads—used your Jedi mind tricks!” she exclaimed. - XD I discovered your story today as I was browsing vampire stories (I'm a sucker for them. Hehe)and I really like it. Some of the dialogue seems a bit awkward, though (mostly for Nicholas), and I would like to see more description of characters, the setting, etc. It would be interesting to know more about Caroline's pasts too. Can't wait for the next update! |