vampire fetish? i have one too...i love this story..

Wow, very good beginning. I'm intrigued and cannot wait for more. So be sure to update soon!

Faith

Fan of Twilight much? Let me guess, she goes through three days of excruciating pain, gets red eyes and a silver crescent shaped scar where she was bitten. Good story but it seems like a lot of your details were referenced in Stephanie Meyers novels.

hello there! very interesting start!

love to read more.

This is the first supernatural story consisting of a vampire that I have read which didn't send me clicking the 'Close' button...lol.

Update soon!Will be waiting.

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so he's making her a vampire.

To be perfectly honest, I usually don't like supernatural stories. But I have to admit, this one has definitely captured my attention, something that's a bit hard to do. So I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter of this, which I'm sure will be just as amazing. Keep up the good work! :D

great start! update soon please! :)

Wow..

That is awesome

Better than most vampire stories I read on this site

Update soon

I like the way the story is going so far. The way it is written is smooth and easy to read without being too simple.

It's really good. I only saw one mistake. When it's at the part where Caroline is talking to the butler you put her name as Catherine instead of Caroline. Other than that I didn't see anything wrong. Like I said it is really good. Please write more soon.

~lovely samurai~