lol the first part of the story had me laughing. I know it was supposed to be sorta like a tense moment but the childishness of Aiden’s actions tickled me silly. I’m really curious about what Neil said about Aiden and Grey though. Glad to finally see Leo. He’s exactly how I expected him to be.

Yeah there was a lot of dialogue in this one but it didn’t throw me off. I’m more concerned (and extremely interested) on how Aiden going to act now that so many things have been exposed on this chapter. The thing I’m mostly anticipating is the imminent faceoff between Aiden and Jake. Will they be on good terms again? Will they fall out? Will Aiden come clean and tell Jake he’s gay? I need to know!

Anyways you have done a great job as always. Can’t wait for the next chapter! This has seriously become like my monthly fictionpress fix. In fact nowadays the only time I ever visit the site is to read your story. Hehe, so keep up the good work!

PS: I noticed you didn’t put in how many pages it took on Microsoft Word this time around. Which is something you been doing on every chapter so I kinda missed not having that little piece of trivia. Just a thought

I love your story. Your characters are so real, and witty. I need the next chapter like NOW! Please update soon. :)

this chapter was far from a train wreck - it was like foreplay for the soul

I LOVE ZACK!

I think Zack likes Aiden.

I think so.

I do believe that is who he likes. He want to put his winky inside of Aiden's bum.

Just to put a picture in your head.

You might say reviews aren't necessary for this chapter but after having that much of a good time reading it for this past hour and a halve it be a crime if I didn't review. It was such a fun read that I didn't noticed the time flying by.

Although this chapter was probably made to give more depht into Zack's and Jake's character, it helped develop Aiden a hell lot more in my eyes. When he was describing why he was in love with Jake I couldn't help but to notice those same qualities on Zack.

Zack's family rules btw! Mostly Kale. I guess I just simply love the characters. You wrote them well. Anyways can't wait for the nezt update!

This made me very happy.

Sad, though, that there's nothing after chapter 7.

Kinda freaky- the photography teacher at my school is called "davis" too

Love it! The chapters are continuously picking up better and better. I like how Aiden didn’t feel necessarily thrilled with the attention but liked knowing that he could be popular if I wanted to. Also liked how he is too used to his bad luck that he didn't even bother to think what was locking him up in the bathroom and just resigned to his fate. I can’t wait to know what happens next!

Please please, oh please update!

i absolutely love this story I cannot wait for the next update!

ari :)

lol, I found Aiden debate of whether Jake was an asshole or simply oblivious to be really funny. Also funny how Aiden found "supporters" in Grey and Kale. Poor Aiden, I like his logic and his way of thinking but he doesn't get the possibility that he may be falling for Zack. Anyways I enjoyed reading this one.

PS: I'm also a big My Chemical Romance fan.

Wow! just wow, It would help to let people know where the scene changes were, cause I was getting lost a few times. other than that, yes there were some grammar and spelling errors, but they were easy to spot and read over. if you take one more day to just go over it, you might be able to catch them all, and all would be good. This is a good, insanely long, but good chapter, actually I think there is a good point in there that it could of been divided into two chapters. I think after the scene where they were working together and before the scene where He wakes up at Jake's. That's my opinion, but it's really good! (now do me a quick favor?... review my story I'm working on, please?)

Great, I'm happy you updated! I was beginning to think you pulled the plug on it. Fortunately that wasn’t the case.

I love how everyone’s parents seem to be so different from one another. I’m sad the project is over but hey, lots of interesting revelations came from it. At least now Damien and Aiden have another friend in common, Grey. Also Aiden intrigues me very much and I like Zack and Jake even more now. (More the former than the latter)

Anyways, keep up the good work! Even if it is only for an audience of two people. LOL that little a/n of yours cracked me up.

I love this story. I love Zack...and stuff.

Anyhow! Zack kind of shocked me by being nice to Aiden (forgot his name. Had to look for it) in the end.

I was all, "Gasp!"

Then, "He such a rude sweetheart."

The End.

I freaking love Aiden. I want to eat that boy... in a totally normal way. Not in the whole, "Yum Human treats" way. But the "Yay! He is just so... odd and yum" way.

Just so you know.

Oh and I like the pace of the story. No need to go to fast or everyone will die... or something.

This chapter was so good, i was totally feeling it! I'm liking this new development you're making with Zack and Aiden, and I'm super glad Jake is finally/hopefully going to act better around Aiden. I'm kinda curious to see how they act around each other on regular basis. I wanna see on what they fundament their friendship. Oh and I laughed hard about the part about having dinner in Damien's house. Unfortunatly you did have some minor grammaticals errors but nothing big to throw me off. Anyways, I'd enjoyed it, good job!