God, I love this so much! Your sentences seem very blunt also, but for some strange reason, it works perfectly! And this storys hilarious, by the way. and it says this is from 2008? ill be sure to check out your profile to see if you wrote any others after im done:)

Loved this story(: It was really cute 3

XOXO

Lexi

The story is beyond words to describe it. It's great and absolutely completed my yaoi fantasy~! :3 Keep it up!

I really enjoy this series, however, there is a noticeable mistake that you continue to repeat. You had said Reiji was older than Gensho therefore, Gensho wouldn't call Reiji "-kun" That suffix is used for someone younger than you, not a respectable, elder. That's the only real mistake I continue to see; other than that you've done a wonderful job with only a few mistakes here and there. (Adds to favorites)

Nice story.I love ngratz!

is he adopted by reiji

Great opening

lol omg i love this chapter funniest thing ever

this looks like the beginning of a story i'll probably fall in love it message me and give me yaoi story ideas.

I really love this story. It's so cute :D

*claps*

Me and my yaoi fangirlness loved it! -

I'm going to go read some more of your stories now.

Please continue writing. -

Call me uncultured, but the names! Gensho? Reiji? Sorry, I'm a bit of an old-soul, with a thing for nice, normal names.

Anyways, this is a nice story as far as I've read :)

SEXi loved it

*~ashley~*

I really did enjoy reading this fanfiction. This must be the best yaoi sex fanfiction I had ever read! XD *fangirl scream*

It makes me blush everytime I read it! It's like watching an anime!

Yay! Gensho and Reiji finally get together! Happy endings!

Great story! I'm just sad it's over but it was a great story with really good lemons!