T.T... i h8 blood too, different reason though..

Great! I think I'm going to have a nosebleed! lol

AH! I luff you! That was such a completely and totally awesome ending! SO CUTE! . Okay wow. I need to stop eating my Easter candy. " But in all seriousness. That was one of the best endings I have ever read for a lemon. I apologize for doubting you and thinking you would off poor Gensho-chan. And I must congratulate you on having no errors, well none that I caught anyways. It's amazing to see how much you improved in your writing through out this story. I'm delighted to have stumbled upon your lemon. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

GYA! I loved it! It was so romantic, and they ended up together! 3

Wah! write more I want to see what happens this time...i hope you really didn't kill Gensho-chan!

I like your story. And yes, rape is very bad. That must mean im a bad person causein most of my stories, someone gets raped. lol thats not funny...xD

Only one more chapter? NO! What lovely yaoi will I read? I really liked this chapter. You're getting so good at catching your spelling and grammars.I only caught 2 spellings/phrasing suggestions. "The blonde was looking out the window of he and Reiji’s room." You could change it to, "The blonde was looking out the window of Reiji’s and his room." Also, "Years began to run down his face as he screamed and heaved." I think you meant Tears instead of Years. Am so anxious to find out if Gensho is okay. And if Reiji finds him alive. Can't wait for the next chapter!

PLease write more it's really a cool and smexy story!

cant wait 4 more love it

*~ashley~*

ONLY TWO MORE?

but this is one of my favorites! (cries hysterically)T~T

I guess all good things have to come to an end eventually

Wah! That was a short chapter! But it was good all the same. Big things come in small packages. Am curious where your headed with this. Can't wait for the next chapter!

P.S.- I'm going to go read Yaoi 911 now. :3

kool story like it so far. love the lemon and cant wait 4more

*~ashley~*

Love the story write more

Yeah... This threesome didn't exactly work out as planned did it? I can tell. It was a nice attempt though. A lot of revision might have to be done to this chapter for it to make perfect sense though. It was a fairly nice chapter regardless. ;D A very interesting read I should say. Keep writing!

Yummy! Now, I want a sundae! :D