Reviews for Haiku for Peace
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Good structure ) thoughts well organised, and good message.

The middle stanza reminds me of John Lennon's "Imagine".

Seemingly simple word choice but nonetheless very skillfully written.


P.S. "no where to run" - I think it should be "nowhere" here.
InViSiBlE wOmAn chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
I like the last line of your first stanza. It was very nicely written. Good job!