|Reviews for Haiku for Peace|
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Good structure ) thoughts well organised, and good message.
The middle stanza reminds me of John Lennon's "Imagine".
Seemingly simple word choice but nonetheless very skillfully written.
P.S. "no where to run" - I think it should be "nowhere" here.
| InViSiBlE wOmAn chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
I like the last line of your first stanza. It was very nicely written. Good job!