It's true. Alchohol is poisonous. You made this sound just like alchohol if it could speak-no-hoping and miserable. It's really good.

I'm sorry about your friend.

Yours,

Ewe.

I LOVED THIS POEM!...I really enjoyed the perspective that you took in describing the drawbacks of alcohol! Keep up the good work! (And sorry about your friend...)

powerful piece... i really respect you for writing about such an undoubtfully difficult but important topic. you really did it justice and it is beautiful... by the way im sorry for your loss

I'm not going to lie, losing your friend to drinking and driving sucks. However, alcohol isn't all bad. It doesn't necessarily hurt everyone. And as long as it's drunk in moderation it won't really hurt you.

So true for alcohols. They kill without warning. Cheers!