This is great, thanks!

It's funny, thanks!

What is up with good authors who have the ability to write decent story plots settling with writing stories about douchebags and girls with absolutely no backbone and who seem to be injected with some kind of drug that makes them like animals so freakin horny for sex all the damn time? I could almost cry looking at them. The guy is a huge jerk and shes turned on by him being an asshole? And the lead female was such a whiny bitch that she keeps insulting the other girl for being a desperado but wasnt she just the same? Practically begging him to fuck her? And I call bullshit on not being able to get her horny self in control, she almost looks like a literal bitch in heat, its pathetic. And the lead guys eho was sooo huge im surprised he could even breathe. I bet he looks at the mirror and tells himself I love you again and again. He was just so sure he was the hottest piece of meat ever I almost gagged. All these potential sadomasochistic relationship stories are so rampant now online no wonder you see girls getting pregnant at 12 and being single mothers thanks to their horrid tastes in assholes, who are now praised and glorified online, and oh of course, their horny selves.

She is so horny its pathetic. Almost like a pitiful girl, practically begging for sex. Its completely ridiculous.

In my opinion, i feel that the lead character is so desperate I feel a little pity for her. Shes desperate for love, sex, relationship it felt a little pathetic. Poor her, I hope shed be able to love herself, defend, and give more justice to herself.

Awesome story, I really loved it, its easy and fun:). I now go to look for Parkers POV...

She's very desperate ! .you changed her characteristics From the beginning I thought she was the sarcastic witty person . Then she met Parker and turned in to a desperate punk ! She Starting to annoy me & Natalie too . I'm just here for Parker though

What the hell he got sleeping problem ? Why he always sleeping on her . Is she that desperate that she lets him and won't tell her friend the actual truth . Cause that's creepy

AWWWW!

Great story!

This is like the best ending ever! I mean I love it! Great job! :D

is this version here same as the on on LJ?

man dis stry is fucking good its good dat he got stick wid her .u know u showed her as a inferer to him as if he is fucking handsome nd she is ugly ...d way he was still deir i love dat fact ..good one

I enjoyed this story. The two are so cute together. The ending was so worth it. Despite my likings for this story, I do think that Parker's ego may be hugely inflated. Women do seem to thoroughly love oogling him. I thought it was hilarious seeing Ashlyn drooling over him. But also a little embarrassing for her. Though Parker probably enjoyed it. It sucks that over and over again Ashlyn seems to think of herself not worthy of Parker's attention, even at the the epilogue. I am glad that Parker seems to have a good way showing her that she is the one. I love his confessions.

Awww! Such a cute story! At times I really thought their relationship wouldn't work out, but I'm glad it did.