Reviews for Sense of Elation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That's so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, where's the link to your livejournal? Great story btw. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would love the full version. My LJ username is nc3600. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() You have a good taste in music, i'll give you that much. But seriously, Ashlyn just seems so stupid. She works at a sports place? She doesn't know how to use a cellphone? Or a computer? You know this is the twenty-first century right? And if she was in such need of a job, why would she quit the one that she was really nervous about getting because it was boring? We are in a recession. This protagonist seems very unrealistic to me. She could at least be slightly intellectual. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't started reading yet, but I'm possibly interested in the complete version? ...the link to your livejournal isn't on your profile anymore |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! This was soooo cute! I'm so glad Ashlyn finally is semi-happy! :) I can't WAIT for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I'd also like to read the full version: popo_chan_xo |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, i'd love to read the full version on livejournal if possible! my username is lrstar123 |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was such a cute story! I love all of it, even the little side story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh boy, this isn't going to end well... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so freaking great. How does she end up in these situations? BNothing ever goes right for her and it is amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think this chapter was as bad as you think. There were a few times when you said something in the third person insted of first, but that's not a big deal. I actually liked this chapter. It was entertaining. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! I would DIE if that ever happened to me. Especially since she doesn't really even know him! LOL. Highly amusing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. I imagine that was just a little bit awkward. I'd probably laugh hysterically too if I was her friend. I'd probably make an idiot out of myself if I was Ash. Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. I liked the very last line. And so far it's really not that bad. I wouldn't call it cringe-worthy, unless you've gotten like, published author amazing since you wrote this...? Anyway, I thought it was funny! |