Hi, GREAT story !

I am quite jealous of Ashlyn ;)

i agree also "who dosn't like smut" so i would love to read the full version!

my username is byronbay

thanx!

I loved this!

parker is amazing.

Not all would let their ex bitch them out for 2.5 hours

I want to read the smut version. I even made an account of Live Journal.

my username is marurmel0

-Im Just Mlssundaztood

Great story! :) I really loved it! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

AH! It was amazing! I loved this story so much!

I wanna read it. My user name is the same there as it is here. I AM the Goddess Pixie LOL... If you see that name, its me, I do not share my name with mere humans.

A comment on the story... um... er... no flames or anything, but I didn't care for Nat, I didn't think she was all that great of a friend... she seemed pretty self-absorbed and not real considerate of Ash's feelings.

~Pix~

I would like to read the full smut version available. My LJ username is nc3600. Thanks and I look forward to reading it!

hahaah. Parker is so freaking cute. What a nice story! Please update Dance with the Devil. Thanks. Love the story!

Cute story

YAY for fluff! That was a good story!

:) THis was amazing.. I read it a long time ago and missed it :D I thought the side story would be in Parkes POV :D

Hey I just realized that in the beginning of your story Ashlyn's parents are alive but towards the middle they're not. It is a bit confusing so you might want to reread.

The part that I'm talking about is in the beginning when she's think of what her mom or dad might be doing. To me that implies they're breathing!

hi rajiya, i re-read again the chapters. i kinda confussed. on chapter 3, ash think to herself 'Has it already been four weeks? I wonder how mom's doing? And dad?'. is her parents already dead? because you write on chapter 16, when parker ask her about her parents and ash reply to him "My dad used to own this computer company and my mom worked with him," I replied as I continued to snoop through Parker's kitchen. "They both passed away a few years ago and I got lucky." and "My mom had a heart attack when she was fifty-two, and my dad just couldn't live without her".

maybe you can write another oneshot about ash-parker and jake-natalie weddings

hey! started reading the story today and finished the story today. woot woot! anyways! i am dissapointed that there wasnt as much love-making-scenes in the story but still satisfied enough haha. but back to the point, regarding your proposition of the scenes on your livejournal i am very tempted.

UN: arizona21

I enjoyed reading this story. I needed some well written light amusing characters to distract me and this did exactly that. If it's alright with you I'll be sending you a friend request on LJ. Same name as mine here. Crimsonangel21

Pretty damn awesome story :D

Ali

xx