Reviews for expectations of a moment
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
The rush and the consistency of sound ushers this along, so the reader gets swept up in the progression. Supurb burst of visuals. Well done. MD:77.
notated descant chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
Breathtaking. I think we all need more moments like these in our lives. I love the mix of poetry and prose, and the line in the parentheses "sh, it's shushing you to sleep". Beautiful.