Reviews for Hung up on You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i notice you hav a thing for fruitd cake but we like fruit cake heehee i like this one is very entertaining. wow i loive them all not that i have read them all but i will get round to it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo. I just read it, and it was far from boring. I really enjoyed reading it, and it was as amusing as it was interesting, I loved it. Great job, thanks for sharing. Enjoy da life~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha lol i like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man. Why can't I have people like that pick up the phone when I prank call? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it. There were a few bits that could be modified, like the "but you know what?" there at the end. Too out of character and out of story. Yeah, it was long, but fun. I like her sarcasm and temperment and her friends are so well defined. And the fact that you barely gave any description of how people look and still built strong characters, that's excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was good... but went really weird towards the end. no offence. ~ KJ |
![]() ![]() Aw, this is so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW!CUTE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, a great one-shot. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Well written, especially the banter, adds great fun to the story. I love the ending, absolutely fantastic! Tecna ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The grammar was a little off, but other than that, I loved it! I'm definitely putting this on my favorites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol funny how they liked each other..through phone calls huh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehehehehehe I do love your oneshots they are so great. JM |
![]() ![]() This was insanely cute. Good job!:] |
![]() ![]() ![]() THAT should've gone for two chapters. I mean, seriously. Yeah. very, very, very long. Saved me download though I suppose. Although Lauren should be taught about stranger danger. |