|Reviews for this is what it takes|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Wow, that's really good. I love the description you used, especially "pieces kindling the northern lights across my star strafed ceiling." Just beautiful.
| XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
I love the line "your words are loaded and laced". absolutely loved that line.
| Kuradok Evangeline chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Nice choice of words.
Very heavy poem, but I love it.
Def. makes u think.
I'd like to see some more poems from you in the future.
| Oracle of Destiny chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
I liked how the worlds are expressed in this one and it made me laugh to some extent. God job with this :)