Reviews for this is what it takes
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Wow, that's really good. I love the description you used, especially "pieces kindling the northern lights across my star strafed ceiling." Just beautiful.
XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
I love the line "your words are loaded and laced". absolutely loved that line.
Kuradok Evangeline chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Nice choice of words.

Very heavy poem, but I love it.

Def. makes u think.

I'd like to see some more poems from you in the future.

K, Evangeline
Oracle of Destiny chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
I liked how the worlds are expressed in this one and it made me laugh to some extent. God job with this :)