Reviews for You Make My Heart Hurt
moshyharrison chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
I love it. But my favorite parts would have to be the entire middle and the "But because the Scotch-tape wont let it fall apart". I love the way you worked, "My heart as been broken before" as a meaning but in a completely different sentence. Awesome!
IdeasInTheAir chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
'' Tearing. Well, not really, but you know, when I first read the title, I immediatley thought of the song Wild Thing. And then you go and put something sad down, when I was half expecting something...ridiculous! Oh well...
Murphy's Lawyer chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
Aw, Qzie, that's a sad one...

- ML