I like the characters, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NóvelStar, just submit your story to hardy nó or joye nó

That was really cool. I really don't know what else I can say about it, but that it was really entertaining. :D

Very interesting take on the Western. I like the whole alternate history course you take and the fact that you point to the historical background of the story.

The writing's done well, but you might want to go back and fix some grammatical errors that creep in every few paragraphs or so. And I'd definitely recommend working on the transitions between scenes, because the story seems to move way too fast.

Otherwise, it's very solid.

Good God! What an incredible story idea. You are now my number 1 dealer when I want a hit of 'weird west' stories. I could read this stuff for hours.

So get writing because I want more! ;)