| Reviews for Shades of Black |
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   warm hands cold heart chapter 1 . 12/19/2009 I thought seen as you read mine, I'd read yours. And I am excited for more. |
| All Over You chapter 1 . 7/29/2009 you should keep this up. hopefully you post more soon. |
| Lerene chapter 6 . 11/21/2008 ah man I was hoping for more with her training with Rain. But what you had was still good. great chapter. Great story. _ |
| Narq chapter 6 . 11/15/2008 OMG I LOVE RAIN! He is SOO CUTE!~ Narq. |
| Narq chapter 5 . 11/15/2008 I DO like it and hope you right MORE! Narq. |
| Narq chapter 4 . 11/15/2008 Yup! I DO like the story so far! Narq. |
| Narq chapter 3 . 11/15/2008 Cool storyline - I'm starting to understand the whole plot~ Hope it goes like what I think Narq. |
| Narq chapter 2 . 11/15/2008 I agree with you - I hate putting those linebreaks in fictionpress. They go all wonky! narq. |
| Narq chapter 1 . 11/15/2008 COOL! I'll read more~ Narq |
| MidnightSolstice chapter 6 . 10/13/2008 Alright an update! I was hoping to hear more about why Olivia was at her fathers but I guess we'll save that for the next chapter? Hehe a cute lil' scene w/ Rain and her, was very cute! Definitely can't wait to see more of those little moments |
| hopelessromantic444 chapter 6 . 10/11/2008 amazing chapter like before. don't make us wait so long for the next chapter please! lol |
| JtheChosen1 chapter 6 . 10/10/2008 YAY U'R BACK! :D great chapter! i like the interaction between Olivia and Rain, definitely funny! but i have to wonder, if Olivia didn't really want to cooperate, wouldn't it be harder for Rain to make her? I mean, its not like he can force her to lift weights and whatnot, b/c she strikes me as a very stubborn girl, lol! keep up the great work! can't wait for the next chapter! |
| pinkeclipse chapter 6 . 10/10/2008 love it! thanks for the chapter! |
| yhjukio chapter 5 . 7/13/2008 your doin a great job keep it up! |
| Ravina chapter 5 . 6/17/2008 Wow - I'm loving it so far! I love your style of writing, and the detail you put into it. There isn't any excessive levels of description, nor excessive dialect; in other words, the story is well-balanced. The only thing that confused me was the dinner Olivia has that first night - I thought at first that she lost her appetite over Andrew. It wasn't until you said she didn't want to stay in the same room as Rain that I realized who you meant. But other than that...great work! Update soon, s'il Vous plaît! - Rebekah |