I like how this begins. great work.

Just because something may be cliche doesn't make it bad, how do you think cliche becomes cliche lol, people do it and make it so common because people like it! I'm glad to see you that you have updated, I waited awhile to see if you would but then you didn't so I thought the story was dead, I happened to scroll down today and see that you did. I was excited. Hope you update again soon!

~Solstice

looks promising! dang olivia's dad is kinda a jerk, but kinda cool...not sure how to handle him yet!

ah, I can't wait until the new chapter. I love this story so far!

dude.. you so need to write some more.

so her dad isn't evil?

Oh great chapter, it was a bit filler but it was a great was to transmit information. Nice character development too.

I hope you get into the discussion with her father that Olivia is wasting her college degree, and shouldn't she ask if she can call her friends?

Oh yay! A recent update! :) THis means that you're going to be updating again soon! :) I hope you do just that!

so her dad is in the mafia? and she's going to fall for rain?

Vive la resistance! Where is her will to fight? Why is she just taking it? Where is the attempt to run! WHere are the hysterics! I love your story, I just hope that lack of resistance is a character flaw, oh and I like the fact that Angie is still in the story!

that sucks ass for her dude. is she a virgin? cause if she's not, you could have this guy that she had a one night stand w/ come in visiting her dad, then she recognizes him from some party, and they have an argument about that day. haha like you're just an aqcuaintance, and she goes, do you call every girl you sleep with aqcquaintances as well? i don't know.

I don't know about her but I would be seething and imaginig about 100 different wasys in which i could extract my revenge. Seriously, but then again i have always been very independant anda valued my freedom. Do what your told never sat well with me. ANyway great update, Andrew rubs me the wrong way. Update soon!

hmm.. update? lol. im confused but if u update more i guess ill get the full storyline.

ah it is so good