|Reviews for Just a heartache poem|
| Fan Fan chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
It's hard to believe few people have reviewed this poem yet when any intelligent person with a little sharp insight could see the artfulness behind the clumsy 'tumble' and the 'bitter end'. Reading this poem, I'm inspired to write one as well :) thank you
| normallyabnormal chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Like I said this is really emotional It made Lyn burst into tears midway through and thaen he had to go sit in the cryroom at church, actually it is qite good and one of your better poems but you really stink at rhyming
P.s is this particular poem about Joeseph Dewayne willis?I think I misspelled it.