Reviews for Almost
fubulicious chapter 11 . 9/20/2008
i like it...update again :)

Jesus saves! ;)
tinybones chapter 10 . 2/4/2008
Amazing.

Continue please.
River chapter 10 . 2/3/2008
You're not going to make Jackie leave, are you? I don't want Chip to go to Florida!

Great Chapter though, I loved the part with Matt and Jackie. Update soon :)

Much Respect,

River
Aaron chapter 10 . 2/2/2008
Jackie sighed and muttered something about “Male egos.”

When I first read that, I thought it said "male Eggos," which prompted to send me into giggles. "We just need some Eggos."

"...well... I have Eggos..."

"DO YOU HAVE BUTTER? AND SYRUP!"

"...yeah."

XD

Alright, so I loved this chapter and I just decided I love this story as well, and Cat is pretty cool. :) Update soonstah babe!

-Steph.
Ravestna chapter 9 . 1/27/2008
i like jackie i hope she sticks arod. thanks for updating

x X xRavestnax X x
River chapter 9 . 1/27/2008
Hey, great chapter! Thanks for the update. I think I like Jackie. Keep up the good writing!

Much Respect,

River
Ravestna chapter 8 . 1/15/2008
wow that was unexpected

x X xRavestnax X x
River chapter 8 . 1/14/2008
Woah! That's insane! Great chapter. Update really soon please, I must know what happens. I'm hooked.
tinybones chapter 7 . 1/2/2008
Awe, yay for Chip and Eva.

I love it.

Continue.
Roger in Happy New Year. ANGST chapter 7 . 1/1/2008
Woot! This chapter was kind of longish, a tad unrealistic, but who careses? I love you.

I AM SO PUMPED FOR RENT. OMFG. WOOTWOOT!

-Steph.
River chapter 7 . 1/1/2008
Update soon! I love it!

Much Respect,

River
Ravestna chapter 6 . 1/1/2008
wow this was great plz update

x X xRavestbax X x
River chapter 6 . 12/31/2007
Thank you for updating! Thank you Thank you Thank you! I love your story. And I love the characters and the songs you put at the beginning. Keep it up, well done.

Much Respect,

River
GALILEO chapter 6 . 12/31/2007
Well THAT was action packed. XD

I liked it still. Not my favorite chapter, but thost art a fantabulous writer, and me loves you for that. Whoop-whoop. Now I want to write a story, but I need an exciting plot line... which we both lack. XD

I LOVE YOU.
Desi chapter 6 . 12/31/2007
It wasn't badly written at all.

I enjoyed it.

It's very good.
24 | Page 1 2 Next »