Reviews for In The End
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
Aww very nice story. I love this. Good work

KRistie Marie
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
i have heard that we are always our own biggest critic.
Wish Bone chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
"than she looked in the mirror…"

'Then' instead of 'than.'

I also thought it was somewhat bland. It was really more like a short story besides the format. I really think you would've benefited with more metaphors and similes.

WB
poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Omg. This is so good. Very realistic and heartfelt. I absoutely love it. Going in my favorites. :) -Sara
angeloftheninthorder chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
How beautiful of a writing. It depicts reality perfectly.
wishing.on.echoes chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
than she looked in the mirror…

You should use then instead of than.

This was ah-maz-inng thought.

I really like this.