|Reviews for In The End|
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
Aww very nice story. I love this. Good work
| dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
i have heard that we are always our own biggest critic.
| Wish Bone chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
"than she looked in the mirror…"
'Then' instead of 'than.'
I also thought it was somewhat bland. It was really more like a short story besides the format. I really think you would've benefited with more metaphors and similes.
| poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Omg. This is so good. Very realistic and heartfelt. I absoutely love it. Going in my favorites. :) -Sara
| angeloftheninthorder chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
How beautiful of a writing. It depicts reality perfectly.
| wishing.on.echoes chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
than she looked in the mirror…
You should use then instead of than.
This was ah-maz-inng thought.
I really like this.