|Reviews for Love Is For Eternity|
| GuiltOverMalice chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
I've read this short work of art over a few times now.
And decided I should finally comment. I am still suffering from dibalief that you wrote this. It is structured accuratly and told with precision and grace. I adore this story to no end, and even have a song that reminds me of it. (So cold preformed by breaking benjerman.) Wonderful work (Except the cruel end) I would love to read another of your fics once you pertain enough kindness to write me one:D. You absolutly must let me know.
| Bluemauve chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Oof. I can see why people are so upset with your ending. Excluding the ending, it was well-paced, interesting, and both character driven and full of action. Wonderful. I think you COULD get away with that end, but you should probably stretch it out some. What ought to be the most climactic part of your story is reduced to a couple of sentences, a sort of afterthought. Elaborate on that more, and while people will still be upset with that ending, it'll be justafiable. Beautiful, beautiful work.