Zomg. I love this. Please, write a scene where they're watching the movie and Art keeps being his damn adorable pervy self, I NEED A LEMON SCENE HERE! And I love you so much for writing this, it's beautiful, just like the rest of your work XD!

Kiss me, hard, now. Please?

Domini-kun

Emo and gothic styles are friggin' AWESOME! Although I have my own unique style. It's called: Loose t-shirt, same pants as always, whatever random unmatching socks are in the friggin drawer. In other words, no sense of style worth mentionning. Although I did get these awesome pants from American Eagle XD! Jeans rule! Tight jeans don't suit me! I need to stop doing this! I need friggin sleep! I have to stop swearing! I need to find a life! I need- to SHUT UP ALREADY!

Emo boys... Are hott.

Domini-kun

P.S. I still love you more.

I WILL NOT ENJOY BEING WHIPPED! (Okay, I admit I might if it's you...) THAT'S BECAUSE I AM A FREAKEN CHIBI SEME! Yes, I took a random SemeUke test on the internet, and I admit the first time I took it I was a Clueless Uke, but the second time I was a Chibi Seme. SO HA! And rants are fun, rants rule the world, half of my normal conversations in a day are made up of rants. Do you know I own Amelie? I only saw part of it, but it rocks. And I like Death Note. Do you like Death Note? I'm a loser. Well, obviously I'm a loser. I mean, it's friggin 3:14 in the friggin morning and I'm typing what must be the most retarded review I ever posted. I'm such a saddo DX!

Take that fucking whip back out, now!

Domini-kun

I use to like Madonna because of one of her CDs until I saw one of her music videos and the cover of Hard Candy...

And I love this story! Haha! He's getting turned on! I KNEW HE LOVED HIM! No, really?

Burning for you, honey!

Domini-kun.

He's in denial wether he says so or not. He's gay. Plain and simple. SO WILL HE FUCKING gO WITH THE FLOW ALREADY? And... Does Keane like LP? ... Why the hell am I still guessing? ... Because I might get it right at one point? No kidding. Keane's gay, right? Right? ... I'm so stupid. Oh well.

Love this story, mah dahrling.

Domini-kun

Adora-detestable face. That's funny XD! I love girl pyjamas. You know, the one with pants... With a normal t-shirt. God, how can my other female citizens stand low-collared tops? I know I can't. I love guy clothes, but girl pjs are just so awesome XD! And comfortable. Oh, the comfort... Uhum. Completely off-topic. Why didn't I start reading this earlier?

Ravish me, immediatly!

Domini-kun

El's so god damn FUNNY! XD! I could be her ugly best friend :P! Jared really is in denial, it's so obvious! And I want to know who that stranger is!

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i ned more art and jared! write another chapter however normal (dirty *wink) or not!

we (counting the phsycotic voices in my head and the other fic readers) will love you FOREVER if you do!

x

p.s please?

Have to admit at the beginning when I eyed those big chucks of blocks, I was thinking should

I or shouldn’t I .

I did at the end.

Climbed through them that is.

I was little breathless, but it was worth it; like climbing on the hill, even when you don’t like climbing, just so you can see a view from it, cause you know that at the end is worth it.

It’s delightful story, with a strong, steady flow that’s sucked me in and with lovely, so refreshing characters. I like how they are not your typical seme and uke and I love how I’m still not sure who is the seme and who the uke. Great story.

AW! I loved it! I pray there is more

Please more?

I reall do want to know whe happens next, espesially with the fact that the dear Jarhead (love that nick name) is technically underage. You left off in so many places!

I'd like to see more, but it's fine where it ended. TWAS great!

HOLY CRAP, YOU HAD BETTER WRITE ANOTHWER CHAPTER! *then looks ashamed at how loud I am yelling* I mean, pleaze write another chapter I would abosolutly kill to see what they turn out to be...

HOLY CRAP!

Bloodfeeder94, one of your, ehh, more enthusiasitic reviewers.

The ending was so cute. Art is such a silly boy. You should so write another chapter. The ending just leaves you hanging and wanting more.

Good job with the sweet story.

What, no more! Please do i have to beg you? No wait bribe you *muahahah* I have Billie Joe and I'm not giving him back till you write more (pwetty pwease with cherries and whipped cream and chocolate sprinkles) Actually I don't want to give him up so we have to share. You can have him weekends. We can send him in overnight mail. And if what you do write is ubber cute and slashy you can also have Brendon Urie. teehee - So now that i have bribed you enough- write! (sorry too demanding)Oh and sorry I'm being so annoying but I saw Across the Universe again today and that mixed with slash and pixie sticks and mountain dew make me really hyper. YAY! *runs around in circles* ! *does a little dance* Please I want more of Art... and El!

~Manana Iguana~