Reviews for Hapless Heroine
Awsome17 chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
good story and Nah It;s bc I only got this account yesterday. And 2 block spam they won;t let me pm until 3 days. But It is nice to kno that there is another bi girl who I can talk 2.
SickButPretty chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
Love the new story, can relate to the character... Reminds me of when I was in hospital for an eating disorder for three weeks. Not sure if that's what's wrong with your girl?
buorin chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
Is this suppose to be a humorous description of a person's stay in the hospital?

The story was going on fine with the way it being described but the ending seemed abrupt. At first when beginning to read it feels like the person is about to go through a dramatic illness then suddenly the same person leaves.

It probably will be clearer if the story has been a little bit more explained with details as to why the visit, the critical condition.