Reviews for Life Without Memory
DrakonOwl21195 chapter 27 . 5/17/2016
Great chapter! It is awesome! She will be successful.
ResilienceSoul chapter 26 . 5/15/2016
Oh, you end your chapters in such an amazing way...
Cannot wait for the execution of Plan A!
ResilienceSoul chapter 25 . 5/14/2016
Aww! I feel so bad for Nathan. That was a beautiful chapter.
ResilienceSoul chapter 24 . 5/12/2016
Excellent chapter! The way you captured the events is truly amazing!
ResilienceSoul chapter 23 . 5/11/2016
Ah! That was totally brilliant!
ResilienceSoul chapter 22 . 5/10/2016
I agree with Hope. She is standing up for the right cause. Go Hope! Amazing chapter!
ResilienceSoul chapter 21 . 5/9/2016
Cool! I loved reading that chapter! It was soooo good!
ResilienceSoul chapter 20 . 5/7/2016
I do hope things go well with Patrick's father! Although, some action would be awesome at that time!
Great chapter!
ResilienceSoul chapter 19 . 5/6/2016
Cool! I like how this s going, so far. I'm excited!
ResilienceSoul chapter 18 . 5/5/2016
Hope is sort of like Cinder from the Lunar Chronicles, if you've ever read those.
I like it. I think that it would be a best seller if it was published.
ResilienceSoul chapter 17 . 5/5/2016
Wow! I can't wait until they have their nice little talk. This is so good!
Gorilla0132 chapter 2 . 5/4/2016
Tons of missing words and writing errors in this chapter. I know it says rewrite but I wasn't sure what that meant exactly. There were so many errors I thought it was on purpose, as I've never read a story like this before. Will read on, as I am intrigued...
ResilienceSoul chapter 16 . 5/4/2016
Wow! This is so good! I really really like it! The way you write...
Unxious Custard chapter 6 . 7/2/2013
Hi, I love this story. The concept, while not wholly original, there's been an adult book written recently about someone who can only remember one day at a time and every time she sleeps she loses her memory, is very well written and in put together in a new way. The fact that she is willing herself not to remember is very powerful indeed. I like the twist at the end of this chapter. The only comment I have is that if someone really can't remember, how would they know whether they were not feeling an emotion because they would never remember having had that emotion in the first place? She can recognise life, pain, death, and hunger, because that is what is around her now. She can recognise anything that is current, but the rest - the outside world, she either has to guess at, or she has to learn from someone in jail with her. Mostly, you get this right, but just occasionally you slip up. But the story is really, really good, and she is a memorable character. I would be pleased if you could review my story, under the fantasy section of fiction press called Psychics v terrorists. It also plays mind games.
Ioga chapter 6 . 4/19/2012
Very nice twist in the story! I really didn't expect it and it explains the strange powers of our heroine nicely. I also liked the fact that there was no miracle recovery for her when they got to the Xatron; another cliche avoided. :)

Thanks for this!
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