This is a very cliched story, but you wrote it well. I like your attention to detail, and the emotion in all the lines. All in all, while it may be cliched, it was very, very good.

~DI4MGZ~

Overall, I liked it a lot! The ending was a lot darker than I thought it was going to be, but it worked well to keep the story from being treacly. I always try and dig up some CC:

-It seems to me that characterizing Beauty as female would work better with the style of writing you're channeling. “She” instead of “it”?

-“She is my only remaining family, since her mother died when the Princess was just a baby, and I will not let her go until I find someone who loves her as much as I do.”

I would just cut the "since her mother..." since it seems spliced in. The implication is there and doesn't need to be stated.

Nice one-shot!

-RM

A beautiful story! Sad, yet made my day better :)

wow... really nice story.. cute..

:D

How beautiful!

I nearly cried...

romantic.