|Reviews for Bright Eyes|
| brokenglassdreams chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
I liked the line 'on the other side of the world/someone is dying.' But then I read the review that said you spelled it wrong... I'm assuming you did it on purpose because, if you didn't, I think the poem would have been less powerful.
| I.O.K.O chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Somewhat grim. Title reminds me of a band. That's all I can think of for now.
| a.breathing.spot chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
the last 3 lines of this poem are amazing
very well written indeed
the only thing i point out is that you spelt "dying" wrong
but other than that this poem is amazing
keep it up