|Reviews for Vivacity that I've Overlooked|
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
"It could be that I’m plagiarizing nature...
But I didn’t see a copyright. Did you?" Good work, once again. You rock my poetic world... sometimes it's really good to hear stuff that sort of mocks everything you hold dear - keeps you from getting too serious about yourself. Once you get serious, it's all over. No lie.
In any case, good work, here. Keep it up, soldier!
And the image at the beginning is awesome/humorous. That's why I like free verse, really. I get to run away from the Meter Man.
| That One Kid From The US chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
I couldn't agree more. Rhyming Scheme and Meter Man seem to take away from poems in most cases rather than add. I couldn't really pull any kind of distinct meaning to this poem, other than the first bit and that it each line following the first bit is describing a smile, a song, a tear, and a leaf; however, it was still an amazing poem. Nice job!
| Inflaming Kaliope chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
You write so well!
| Senorita Diabla chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
*snoogles* You're my new favorite person D.
Oh, Jude, I'm a flippant one, aren't I...
Gorgeous poem, though, you're on my favorite authors' list. Someday I'll be back to browse your collage of works.