Reviews for A Bit Touched in the Mind
Cookie Seller On The Dark Side chapter 23 . 3/24/2014
That is aboslutely amazing!
I love it!
ILoveEtc chapter 23 . 8/13/2012
Niccccceeee :)
RubyRed22 chapter 23 . 8/5/2012
Aha, I loved it! But... You still didn't tell us how Doug knew everything!
RubyRed22 chapter 21 . 8/5/2012
Holy crap?... What the hell is wrong with these people?! Heh heh... Now I'm laughing... No pun intended x2.
RubyRed22 chapter 15 . 8/5/2012
Oh wow... I kind of feel stupid now. Nice twist!
RubyRed22 chapter 14 . 8/5/2012
I'm sorry to say that I totally saw that coming... However, I thought it would have been Mae finding out by reading her mind! Anyways... ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
R. Ficst chapter 23 . 5/16/2012
Absolutely loved it! Fantabulous work! Your voice is humorous and unique, and I loved your characters, their personalities, and their abilities. Great work with the plot. The pacing was almost spot on, I just felt that some of Mae's religious musings were snapped in and out of a little abruptly, so those sections could use a little more work to be integrated into the flow more smoothly. I'm excited about the sequel mentioned in your last author's note. I'll certainly be checking out your profile to see more of your work.

Great job, and thanks for posting! I thoroughly enjoyed the read!
Tammy Rae chapter 23 . 5/10/2012
Great story! Great characters! This was a really fun read!
lionkinglover3 chapter 11 . 4/14/2012
awesome story
AJ Garcia chapter 23 . 3/28/2012
AJ Garcia chapter 8 . 3/27/2012
My sister has the gift of decrement. She can feel people, but it's not something that she can use for her own pleasures; far from it. I know this guy who has the same gift and he is using it for himself and he hates it. The only way he can delude it is to get drunk. All my Sis has to do is ask God to make it stop and He does:) pretty cool if you ask me!
Charlee Rayne chapter 23 . 3/11/2012
what's going to happen? With her mom? with Seth? with her friend?
FamishedNight chapter 23 . 12/21/2011
Awesome story! Loved it!
Dalilt chapter 23 . 9/17/2011
I loved this story. You managed to insert the supernatural in a natural way. It doesn't seem forced and it flows wel. Their powers weren't also the main focus and that's nice. I look forward to the sequel in order to learn more about all those small mysteries..

I only feel sorry for Minh..poor guy ..
Candescence chapter 23 . 6/24/2011
ok, so this story. Not my favorite of what you written. Some parts I just barely skimmed over it. It sort of dragged and some things were left to be desired. I liked this story though. Even Doug. I think I like him better than Seth ;) We'll see what happens with the sequel
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