Reviews for A Bit Touched in the Mind |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, cliffy. How I loathe thee, yet welcome the anticipation for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is totally her co-worker at Hot Topic... I know it is! Hahah! *evil laughter* |
![]() ![]() Got your email! Did not mind the ranting either, lol. Ah. Another perfectly written chapter. I'll be here, waiting for ur next update and for your next story too! Awesome job! sunny |
![]() ![]() ![]() guh i want more! haha. update soon! i want to know what happens! i'm not even going to guess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great! Update real quick! |
![]() ![]() Excellent. Cutesy and fun, but well-developed and interesting as well. Also, unique. I can't wait until you update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() See? ITS GONNA BE DOUG! *dances* I told you so! I told you so! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did God intend for these people to be so nosy in someone else's business? They can't possibly know what her parents reaction will be; hell, they could accuse her of being crazy, of being a witch, lock her up, anything. Besides, what makes them think they know how God wants her to act, what he wants her to say? I find it amusing that Seth's mother doesn't even know Mae's family and yet she presumes to know what Mae should or should not tell them. Its like adults telling scared and pregnant teens to tell their parents... maybe they didn't tell their parents because their father was going to beat them to death. God may intend for families to be open and honest, but that's in best case scenarios, isn't it? Not every family is a perfect model of how God (I would assume) intended it to be... otherwise there wouldn't be Child and Family Services -.- and people like Mae's mom REALLY scare me... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiya. :) I'm really enjoying the story. It's seriously one of the better ones I've read recently. Developed plots seem to be hard to come by online. :D Sorry I haven't reviewed. To be completely honest, I'm incredibly lazy and don't review much. I really don't think it was Courtney. I have this feeling it'll be someone completely unexpected. No guesses, but I'm preparing for a shock. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, staring harshly and speculating... I dunno who it is. Can you put the next chapter up soon and put me out of my misery? I mind misery. That was a bad joke. Sorry... bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story. i love seth |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...WTF? Dude, this is so suspensful! UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() down with cliff hangers! down with cliff hangers! |
![]() ![]() My gosh, this story is incredible! Your story deserves way more reviews than this. You have a good style and a good sense of mystery! I'm loving it and hoping for another quick update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your story. The plot is absolutely amazing! Keeping writing. |